April 30th, 2009 in Poetry, nature |
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My poem was:
The earth stands still in space like a rock in the ocean then a fish swims by
Oh, beautiful Earth Spinning around in space The Earth is slanted
the earth is spinning a huricane is forming the stars are very bright
so many stars looking down, down on to the great earth so many stars smiling
stars,stars i wonder what are you, balls of burning flames. are you what i see.
Christopher and Connor….I love your ways with words for this Earth..always moving and changing and revolving and spinning, yet remaining so still.
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May 1st, 2009 at 5:30 am
My poem was:
The earth stands still in space
like a rock in the ocean
then a fish swims by
May 6th, 2009 at 11:32 am
Oh, beautiful Earth
Spinning around in space
The Earth is slanted
May 6th, 2009 at 11:35 am
the earth is spinning
a huricane is forming
the stars are very bright
May 6th, 2009 at 11:37 am
so many stars looking
down, down on to the great earth
so many stars smiling
May 6th, 2009 at 11:42 am
stars,stars i wonder
what are you, balls of burning flames.
are you what i see.
May 7th, 2009 at 12:06 pm
Christopher and Connor….I love your ways with words for this Earth..always moving and changing and revolving and spinning, yet remaining so still.